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[gen-dbsk] and then there were four

Dec 13, 2009 20:42

title : and then there were four ( Read more... )

!fic, r : pg, p : gen-dbsk, l : one-shot

Comments 13

yuxo December 14 2009, 02:07:44 UTC

ahhhhhh ha ha ha ha last two lines are killer. >8D but i'm glad it's five and not four. otherwise that would leave yunho so alone if changmin weren't there. :(

changmin's a sweetie. ♥ i feel so bad for him.

i...have run out of things to say. :D

♥

chdairkld December 14 2009, 05:30:55 UTC

this is isn't so much sad...but just depressing. it's a very fast pace story, the way you wrote it, just line after line and you know them so well as a fan...and it hurts. and i do find myself thinking that sometimes, what if they never were?

thank you for sharing.

su_dreams December 14 2009, 10:07:31 UTC

ouch. &hearts

jorge_callas December 14 2009, 11:09:39 UTC

This was gorgeous. Very elegiac. I think you got Changmin's tone exactly right, it's measured and thoughtful but with a lot of emotions running underneath it all.

jinsung December 14 2009, 11:19:22 UTC

I read your fic and I was wondering, now, what is this? After awhile I guessed it was closest to a character study.

I felt a sense of desire for things that remain unavailable in this piece and I liked it. It brought out Changmin's rather thoughtful nature, how he doesn't open up easily. Both the tone and content were just right.