Absolutely splendid. I love your Michael voice, especially in the voiceover pieces, and how likely he is to sacrifice himself for others. Also, I completely think the electric zombies worked. Very scary.
Fi always has explosives. I sort of think she's like ...when they make Elizabeth get rid of her weapons in PotC 3 and she keeps tossing more on the pile, pulled out of everywhere. Heh.
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(It might say something about my love for this comm that I won't read any Burn Notice fic except for here. It's just so well done.)
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You have Michael's voice down pat.
And Fi and her explosives!
Awesomecakes all the way around. Bonus awesome for being a pinch-hit!
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Thanks! I'm glad you liked the Michael-voice.
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