Comments | apocalyptothon: A Damp, Drizzly November in My Soul, for <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/obsessivemuch">obsessivemuch</a></strong> (Dollhouse, PG)

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A Damp, Drizzly November in My Soul, for obsessivemuch (Dollhouse, PG)

Jul 19, 2009 11:41

Title: A Damp, Drizzly November in My Soul
Author: penmage
Recipient: obsessivemuchFandom: Dollhouse ( Read more... )

Comments 8

ficwize July 19 2009, 17:06:12 UTC

That was really good. I'm covered in goosebumps. I love the idea of the imprint wearing off. Brilliant work.

obsessivemuch July 19 2009, 18:38:24 UTC

Ooh, I love this! Thank you for writing it. I love Paul's voice and his confused thoughts about Mellie.

snickfic July 19 2009, 19:34:11 UTC

Ohhh, this is a lovely character study of Paul and the two way he thinks about Mellie. I kept thinking he'd finally ask her what she does in her apartment every morning, but he never did, alas. And her slowly deteriorating imprint was a great way to add to the hopelessness of the situation.

With this piece you did one of the things I think is hardest in this kind of fic: you made the eventual sad ending inevitable, all the while making me wish like mad that some kind of happier resolution was possible.

afteriwake July 20 2009, 05:10:24 UTC

Oh, wow. That was really a very good read.

afrocurl July 21 2009, 03:36:48 UTC

That's a view of the Dollhouse world I hadn't seen in a long time.

Depressing, but true to form.