Behold These Shards and Cinders, for krilymcc (How I Met Your Mother, PG-13)

Sep 01, 2008 09:07

Title: Behold These Shards and Cinders
Author: cinaed
Recipient: krilymcc, who asked for "Ted telling his kids about how NYC was destroyed (Bonus points if it could involve the Cloverfield Monster)"
Fandom: How I Met Your Mother
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Spoilers for 2x16 "Stuff"
Warnings: Death, violence.
Word Count: 1,870
Author's Notes: Thanks go out to musical_junkieRead more... )

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milleniumrex September 1 2008, 14:41:41 UTC
This is just brilliant. I love how you perfectly capture Ted's mindset during the disaster, and the aftermath. The last paragraphs were just perfect.

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cinaed September 1 2008, 15:05:04 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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entangled_now September 1 2008, 16:40:44 UTC
I love this, the way it unfolds is just perfect and you managed to slot it in and still keep the timeline.

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cinaed September 1 2008, 16:48:24 UTC
So glad you enjoyed it. :)

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cinaed September 1 2008, 16:49:08 UTC
Thanks! I loved the scenario too. :) I'm glad you enjoyed the fic.

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stellar_dust September 1 2008, 18:44:27 UTC
Oh, I LOVE this. Your Ted is spot-on, and the image of Barney with a medal is the perfect cap! AWESOME.

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cinaed September 1 2008, 22:28:49 UTC
Thanks! (I don't know why Ted's POV is the easiest for me to write, but he is.) So glad you enjoyed it. :)

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katayla September 1 2008, 18:58:04 UTC
Such an interesting premise. Well done! :)

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cinaed September 1 2008, 22:29:07 UTC
Thanks! :)

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