Fic: We Are The Abyss, for storydivagirl, Supernatural, R

[entangled_now]

Title: We Are The Abyss
Author: entangled_now
Recipient: storydivagirl
Fandom: Supernatural
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Rating: R
Spoilers: None
Warnings: Incest, the Apocalypse
Prompt: Dean never figured he'd be there for the end of the world.

Comments

[dolimir_k]

Wow, I think you broke me with this. Very well done. I loved the creeping sense of horror as time went on. Loved the idea that it was killing both natural and supernatural beings. Loved the intereaction between the boys...and while I'm not really that big into the big "I", I thought you handled it very well, made it very believable here.

[entangled_now]

Thank you very much, I really wanted it to be creepy so I'm glad that worked for you, and the fact that you thought it was believable is a huge compliment.

[amothea]

I really enjoyed your story.

[entangled_now]

Thank you very much!

[whitetower]

Loved it, loved it. So simple and yet evocative and despairing at the same time. Like the poster above, the big I gives me the willies, but somehow I didn't mind it here. Thanks for a great read. :)

[entangled_now]

Thank you, I'm really glad that the whole thing worked for you.

[beautifulstars]

very much enjoyed this. I like the slow building of the tension, of the loneliness. It was well-paced which really gave it atmosphere.

[entangled_now]

Thank you, I'm so glad there was tension, I worried a little about skipping large chunks of time. I'm very pleased you liked it.

[swordage]

Oh my goodness. That was... surreal, and horrifying, and terrible to behold. The ending has me in tears - but it couldn't end any other way, could it? That's just so terribly lonely and awful. I just - oh, boys. I want everything to be okay for them, but the whole point of this is that nothing will be okay again, isn't it? Everything just rots, the bad and the good and the things in between. It's not fair, it just is. *sniffles*

[entangled_now]

Thank you very much, I'm really pleased the whole story worked for you. I really wanted it to be creepy and the rotting analogy is perfect. There wasn't really any other way I wanted to end it.