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[apiphile]

not really worth a title

i. When things were bad I was good
for you, the medicine you needed
and now things are good I'm bad;
a warning must be heeded.

ii. You should lose the love
from inside your heart
because it's just "collateral damage"
until it's your mother

Comments

[mizzy2k]

Sometimes your words make my brain stop working for a second. It's terribly reassuring that I apparently have a brain that does work so it can be stopped. But this is mournful and hurty and pretty with it and guh. no words.

[apiphile]

Well it's reassuring to know that my occasional wordvomit has a use. Even if it's just breaking people's brains. ;)

[kat_lair]

I really like the first verse, it feels like a beginning of a song.

[apiphile]

too bad I was too lazy to go anywhere with it, really.

[crotalus_atrox]

The first verse is very evocative and makes me sad.

[apiphile]

Tis not a grand way to feel.

[sour_idealist]

Oh wow, the last three lines of that second stanza. Holy shit. The last two lines, too.

[apiphile]

Thank you, Etc. :)