Well, it's still not finished, and I think I need to rewrite bits.
But I'm pretty pleased with this bit:
Making a monster is not like making a man.
To make most things, one must add things together. To make a man, take a boy and add time and experience, add judgement and intelligence, add heartbreak and a tempering or forging of ambition.
To make a monster, one must take things away.
Making a monster is not like making a man.
To make most things, one must add things together. To make a man, take a boy and add time and experience, add judgement and intelligence, add heartbreak and a tempering or forging of ambition.
To make a monster, one must take things away.