Comments | apiphile: I wrote most of this in the car

apiphile

I wrote most of this in the car

Dec 30, 2010 02:26

( kind of a 'deleted scene' from the NaNo )

bad writing is bad, john/mon, underage sex, nano, writing, fic

Comments 13

stratospherique December 30 2010, 02:36:04 UTC

Filthwizard ILU.

apiphile December 30 2010, 02:40:12 UTC

VALIDATIONYAY.

thecatinthetree December 30 2010, 02:44:13 UTC

There is nothing I can say to this that won't make me sound like a pervert.

apiphile December 30 2010, 16:57:58 UTC

We're all perverts here, perv away!

thecatinthetree December 30 2010, 18:48:04 UTC

For reasons probaly best left unexplored my mind turned that into a bastardized quote from Alice in Wonderland: "But I don't want to do among perverts. Said Alice. Too late, said the rabbit, we're all perverts here.

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apiphile December 30 2010, 16:59:44 UTC

will you just up and make beautiful literary babies with Dahlquist now pls?

... HRNGH. Yes. I would hit that typewriter. I mean, I'd love to. His worldbuilding and characterisation and subtle changes in narrative voice KILL ME.

A MOVIE WHAT.

WHAT.

TELL ME EVERYTHING.

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apiphile December 30 2010, 17:10:45 UTC

Ara ara ara ara can you get me into the press screening I can give you all kinds of sexual favours or money or whatever.

swear_jar December 30 2010, 07:43:29 UTC

I didn't read your whole NaNo, but I read the chapter where Mon is introduced when you chucked it at me over IM so I have juuuussst enough context and HOMG THIS IS RIDICULOUSLY HOT.

I have no idea how you made it so hot given his cranky narrating voice and some of the descriptions (okay, so I mostly got stuck on "agree to sleep with your maggoty ass" towards the end because that is repulsive and perfect), but ;;sajdh;lkjsdjha sdhrrgnnng.

HNNNNNG.

Also When I'm this fucked over by the revenge of the grape and the grain - poetic, right? -

YES IT IS POETIC. I totally thought it was pretty before the sarcastic side note there, heh.

apiphile December 30 2010, 17:02:22 UTC

<3 It was going to be longer but he wouldn't cooperate with the reporter and I'm like DAMN HENNESSEY I WANT TO SEE YOU GET LAID OKAY and he's like FUCK OFF THIS IS MY PRIVATE LIFE and I'm like I SHOULD NEVER HAVE WRITTEN YOU IN THE FIRST PERSON.

soda_and_capes January 4 2011, 00:44:02 UTC

:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDD YES. Totally cheating and reading this before I finish the rest, but YES. I love his fucking attitude. It's so much fun.

apiphile January 4 2011, 02:03:12 UTC

Muah, well, I guess it doesn't strictly speaking spoil you for any of the story...