I received enough input to feel comfortable posting this to my site. It's not actually listed on my index page because I couldn't get my FTP program to cooperate with me last night.
Anyway, it's posted at:
http://www.phantomroses.com/apckrfan/fanfic/thebigaffair.html Comments, suggestions are welcome.
Thanks to everyone who read and offered to read for me. I appreciate it!
~Susan