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"Overboard" by Jestana - Pirates of the Carribean

Apr 12, 2008 22:33

Title: Overboard
Author: jestana
Characters: Jack Sparrow, James Norrington
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Alas, I own nothing except the story itself. The characters belong to the rodent empire (otherwise known as Disney)
Challenge Prompt: O Captain, My Captain
Word Count: 1,944
Summary: Jack's crew find a certain Commodore in the ocean.
Author's Note: Set not ( Read more... )

pirates of the caribbean, o captain my captain challenge

Comments 8

porridgebird April 13 2008, 22:46:19 UTC

Awww. That's sweet!

jestana April 13 2008, 22:48:09 UTC

*blush* Thanks!

nautilusl2 April 14 2008, 08:18:00 UTC

tah - how cute!

I really, really like that you made James take off his shoes when he fell in the water. My grandpa died long before I knew him because he was trying to save me drowning father (before I was born) with his shoes on. My papa was saved but grandpa sunk under the weight of his shoes and clothes.

So I guess what I'm saying is go you for saving James' life!

jestana April 14 2008, 14:03:10 UTC

*blush* Thank you!

I was thinking of when Elizabeth fell in the water and Jack had to take her dress off to keep it from sinking them. It seemed to make sense that the same went for James' coat and I've heard that it's a good idea to kick your shoes off if you fall into water.

As if I would let the dear Commodore die! Unless I wanted him to haunt Jack... *smirk*

nessaancalime April 14 2008, 14:21:29 UTC

It's nice that they aren't at it like bunnies straight away, makes sense it would take a bit more before they get to that. And all that UST ready to burst ::G:: No objections to a sequel where things get sweaty, though :-)
It was a bit strange with Norrie so easily talking about becoming a pirate. But maybe he has seen enough former Navy hanged for piracy to know how fine a line it can be. Still, his vehemence on pirates sits a bit uneasy with him being so ready to embrace it.

jestana April 15 2008, 01:43:30 UTC

No, as fun as that would have been, I couldn't see it happening. Partly because Norrington didn't feel like it.

I'm already planning a sequel, no fear of that.

He said it more in jest, but please note that he emphasize 'may'. It's not a certainty. He's more likely to turn privateer. Though Jack will tease him about 'turning pirate'.

lover_of_1776 April 15 2008, 17:16:18 UTC

Nice job!! Fantastic read!!!

Loved it!!!

=^..^=

jestana April 15 2008, 19:33:32 UTC

*blush* Thank you!