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"For You Alone" by romanticalgirl - Persuasion

Feb 24, 2008 08:28

TITLE: For You Alone
AUTHOR: Laura Smith
PAIRING: Wentworth
RATING: G
SUMMARY: Turn away
DISCLAIMER: Persuasion and all the characters therein belong to people who are not me. I make no profit from this, I just like playing with them.
CHALLENGE: The heart's desire
AUTHOR'S NOTES: Thanks to nolivingman for the beta. Hopefully the structure is understandable ( Read more... )

persuasion, the heart's desire challenge

Comments 6

nolivingman February 24 2008, 16:52:07 UTC

Oh, Frederick. He's so sad her and so bitter, and still so in love.

romanticalgirl February 24 2008, 16:57:55 UTC

He *longs*. And you know if he was around her, he'd *lean*.

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmleaning.

sylvene_fic February 24 2008, 18:55:01 UTC

Beautiful. :) So very restrained. So period!

romanticalgirl February 25 2008, 06:45:18 UTC

Thank you so much!

lokei February 25 2008, 15:14:57 UTC

This is really agonizing--it's perfect and bitter and sweet and I love the way it evokes the letter that he finally DOES write.

*re-reads, sighs* Really, honestly? I wish I'd written this. *grin*

romanticalgirl February 27 2008, 06:16:17 UTC

Thank you so much! I was nervous trying this, but I couldn't *not*. I have something planned for Mr. Elliott too, so we'll have to see how that goes. Mostly because Sam West is so damn pretty. Hee.