TITLE: Its Own Reward
AUTHOR:
inlovewithnightCHARACTERS: Kennedy, Bush
RATING: G
DISCLAIMER: Not mine, etc.
CHALLENGE PROMPT: Prizes
AUTHOR'S NOTE: Set during "Retribution." Thanks to
romanticalgirl for a beta that more amounted to rebuilding it from the ground up.
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Thanks!
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Favourite Archie bit (ahem!): “We've removed one captain already,” Archie said, not bothering to look over his shoulder or moderate his tone. “It couldn't be so very hard to do it again.”
That is so dangerously reckless and so savagely Archie at this point of the story that it makes me tingle with recognition. :)
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Just wanted to add that the beginning is brilliant - it really grabbed my attention:
Horatio vanished into the fort, every step precise and clipped and furious if one knew how to look, which Archie suspected that no one but he himself cared to do. It wasn't done to stare at the walking dead. Excessively morbid. A bit ghoulish.
Wow, that certainly made me sit up straighter in my seat and read on very carefully indeed!
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