Gift-fic For theotherdenise!!! (Also: I've written OP fic again!!!)

Oct 21, 2010 20:01

Birthday fic for theotherdenise! You suggested One Piece, and any excuse I can get to write ZoSan is a good one (and the new chapters have given me good inspiration, so yay:D) Hope you enjoy this ^_^

Title: Changes and Revelations

Fandom: One Piece

Rating: PG-15-ish.  Nothing too bad!

Pairing: Zoro/Sanji.  My usual fare xP

Chapter: 1/1

Word Count: 1409
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fic, character: zoro, pairing: zoro/sanji, character: sanji, fandom: one piece

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theotherdenise October 22 2010, 19:22:01 UTC
Thank you so much! ♥ *flailing like a penguin out of water* I'm happy to have got you writing ZoSan again :P And I loved this! This is now definitely what happened and no one shall convince me otherwise :D Especially love these lines:

“I think she’s missed you,” he nodded to Wadou as Sanji absently ran a hand down her saya.

“Is this a way of saying ‘I missed you’ without sounding like you have real emotions?” Sanji countered.

because it just says so much about their relationship. ;3;

I'm a bit tired and a bit over-emotional so I'm going to stop rambling now before it gets too weird but, again, thank you ♥

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aoitsukikage October 22 2010, 21:58:53 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it :) And it was fun to write the boys again; it's been too long xP

Haha, and they'll never say anything outright; they just use poorly-concealed half-truths :P

Hope your day's gone well!

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ginnyvos October 23 2010, 14:36:28 UTC
*giggles like a schoolgirl* You titled the fic Hitting the ground running! You did!

Loved the fic, it was just fun and sweet enough! ^___^

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aoitsukikage October 24 2010, 05:14:33 UTC
Oh, boo, I used my template from HtGR and forgot to change that (see icon for my reaction xP)

Thanks! I need to get into OP-fic again because I miss writing the characters...

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tamaaki_kaer1 November 15 2010, 01:04:23 UTC
ZoSan reunion is EPIC and you write Zoro so well and so sweet. Love this!

That aside, allow me to say your writing style has changed so much from two years ago! It was like reading someone else's story, but in a good way. Both writing styles are good but I kinda miss the old one. Silly me. I still love this fic though. :)

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aoitsukikage November 15 2010, 01:55:09 UTC
Thanks :)

And it seems that my writing style honestly changes from story to story, but I can definitely see a difference from this to what I wrote a couple of years ago! I think I was going for a more vague and descriptive style in this fic, but this isn't how I'm writing all the time :)

Glad you liked it :D

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paolka06 November 27 2010, 09:32:34 UTC
aoitsukikage November 27 2010, 10:10:55 UTC
Thanks :) This was my first OP fic in a LONG time, but it's remarkable how easy these guys still come to me when I'm writing xP

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