WOTHCS Chapter 1

[aoi_tenshi05]

Title: What Only the Heart Can See
Pairing: TaNaka (and more to come)
Genre: Romance, Drama, Angst, AU
Rating: PG for now
Disclaimer: I only own the plot. 
Summary: Nakamaru Yuichi had always dreamed of finding love that he can cherish and when a man named Tanaka Koki came to his life, he believed that forever has begun with the love that they share.

Comments

[nikkimattei]

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!! AHHH!!! I am so siked and I haven't even read this yet!!! LOL. I am at work right now (which means I shouldn't be on here but when I get the chance I will read it properly and comment!!

Oh BTW I'm First!!!

[aoi_tenshi05]

LOL... Nikki, calm down! The fic won't go anywhere... but you sure are fast ne~

Yes, congratulations for grabbing the 1st spot... will wait fro your proper comment~ ^^

Okay I read it!!!

[nikkimattei]

LOL...I know it won't I was being my over dramatic self LOL...I wasn't feeling so hot physically when I saw this...lets just say I forgot for a moment how I felt bad when I saw that you posted a new story :)

Okay so I have read it. I liked it a lot and will enjoy how this will all unfold out. The writing style of this one I like a lot. It seems different than FFMA. And Ueda, so far, I can see a lot of comic relief potentially coming from him. Makes me wonder who he has been oggling at the matches? Already sense that something dramatic is coming....Looking forward to reading more. Another story about my OTP!!! There is isn't enough stories out there still :( even when they are matched with original character or other members so of course I am excited about this!!

Re: Okay I read it!!!

[aoi_tenshi05]

I'm glad the fic helped. But how are you now? Are you sick?

Uhmyeah... I tried to put more narratives... It's a bit tough for me because my writing style is more like script-writing rather than novelistic type. I'll do my best to maintain this style for the rest of the fic.

IKR? I really miss seeing fics of our OTP... I am relieved that I was finally able to start this new one. Please be patient with the updates ne... I just write in between breaks in the office. >

Re: Okay I read it!!!

[nikkimattei]

No, not too sick now. It was that special time of the month :( and mine can be really bothersome, but it was better since I have been attempting to eat better.

Narratives and more script like writing are hard to write..but you're off to a good start

Yep, I was looking at the volume of J-pop fan fiction Kat-tun specially compared to k-pop and its like a small drop compared to k-pop...and if it is Kat-tun its AKAME mostly or Ryoda which would be next I think.

And I will be patient..I totally understand about squeezing in time to write

Re: Okay I read it!!!

[aoi_tenshi05]

okay... take care of yourself... I often get sick lately too. U_U

It's sad our OTP barely gets attention... I want to write as much as I can but it's either I'm busy or having writer's block or both. tsss...

Re: Okay I read it!!!

[nikkimattei]

definitely, the same for me too...