A new Life(one shot)part 1/?

[aoi_no_sora]

 TITLE: A New Life
PAIRING:ryoda
RATING:G
GENRE:angst, mpreg
SUMMARY: Ryo cheates on Tatsuya until he had enough so he ran away. 4 years later he is back...but this time he is not alone!

Comments

[aoi_no_sora]

WOW THANK YOU FOR READING I WAS SO NREVOUS NO ONE WOULD READ IT THANK YOU!!!!! YEAH WE NEED MORE RYODA WRITERS, I'LL TRY TO UPDATE BUT I KIND OF HAVING A WRITER'S BLOCK BUT YOU'RE FREE TO LEAVE SOME TIPS YOU MIGHT WANT ME TO ADD IN THE STORY. SO LIKE I SAID I'LL UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE BUT SINCE I'M IN SCHOOL AND THE WRITER'S BLOCK THAT WILL BE A LITTLE DIFFICULT! THANKS FOR READING GLAD YOU LIKE THE PLOT, YOU MADE ME SO HAPPY!! TAKE CARE!!

[aoi_no_sora]

yeah it would be nice*winks back*,btw thanx for the advice!!!=^O^=

[aoi_no_sora]

oh thank you i didn't know there was a ryoda community i'll try to porst it there as soon as i can and the second part as well. sorry i couldn't post this week!! bye-bye

[snow_meow]

I cannot wait to read more.
This story has potential.

I cannot wait to read the converstation between Ryo and Ueda.
I cannot wait to read what will happen when Ueda and KAT-TUN meet again.

A piece of advice. You really need to have more white spacing between your paragraphs and sentences. In addition the first two paragraphs are too long. You should make the paragraphs shorter. It is really hard to read.

[aoi_no_sora]

glad you read it. thanks for the advice it's my first time writing and posting in LJ so i don't have enough experience and some times i tend to write a lot in one paragraph! Thanx the advice it helped a lot! i wonder what ryoda will talk about?=}

[trifarashi]

ahhh...
i really want to read the next chapter....

[aoi_no_sora]

about that i'll probably post sometime during the weekend sorry i'm kind of overflown with homework!TT-TT and since this is a-not yet-finished or written fic i have to think of what to write next so that will take a while. so people leave some ideas for me!thanx for reading!=]

[aoi_no_sora]

i'll probably turn this "oneshot" to a short multi-chapter

[granity20]

girl i love this sooo much!!!!^_^ i really hoped you could update soon!!!!

[aoi_no_sora]

oh thank you!!! I'll try to update as soon as possible!!