AoS novel by me - reviews please

[chrisisthelawr]

I'm working on an Age of Sail novel, and I'm uploading the finished chapters here.


http://community.livejournal.com/aos_novel

All I ask for is feedback. C'mon, you all love the era, and you can give a lot of counsel.

Cross-posted on some AoS-related communities. Last time I bother you here with it.