Leave Me Breathless (Chapter 15)

Dec 21, 2011 12:49


A/N: Announcement 1: There are only two chapters left after this one. Chapter 16 will be published as usual, on Friday, and then chapter 17 will be a late Christmas present - looong and up on Tuesday, 27 Dec.

Announcement 2: This chapter is rated R. And I mean, 2500 words of R material. Make sure your boss isn’t standing behind you if reading at ( Read more... )

leave me breathless, r, smut, breathe 'verse

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windrider1967 December 21 2011, 12:35:42 UTC
Beautiful as always .... The SLOW progression here is just perfect. I don't know if I hae said it before or not, and if I have I am going to say it again, I KNOW that this is a hurt/comfort/recovery fic BUT .... the way it is written it could very easily be a "The way ttenagers/young adults should approach the joy and beauty that is physical intimacy" fic.

Just like what I love in AUs are the ones where the story stands on it's own, complete with Klaine being the icing ont he cake this is the best of the "let me learn you" fics ... so perfect so sweet so amazing. Kinda makes me wish I could go back 26 years or so ....

Great job sweetie and I swear I will cry when it is all over

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canuckpagali December 21 2011, 12:59:30 UTC
This. Every word of it, this. So very much this.

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anxioussquirrel December 26 2011, 12:28:35 UTC
Thank you!:)

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keenoled December 21 2011, 13:44:52 UTC
Oh, nicely put! Totally agree.

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punkkitten2113 December 21 2011, 13:25:44 UTC
Blaine found himself unable to tell where he ended and everything else began. He was happy to drift on the currents of sensual pleasure until they drowned him, only to carry him gently to a shore of satisfied exhaustion.

What a beautiful line! This entire chapter was breathtaking! I love too how slow the buildup is, and how trusting Blaine is with Kurt. It's so comforting to see them working through this together, and now that Blaine finally knows how much he matters, it can progress from there.

And did it progress! I was so excited when Blaine got bold with Kurt and got him to come so easily. When he was all "Really? From that?", I was all, "Duh, sweetie. Have you seen yourself?" =)

And then I got all teary-eyed (this seems to happen a lot with the beautiful UNF you give us), because they have come. so. far.

I will second that I'll cry when it's over, because I love this verse so much, but I do look forward to all the other projects to come!! (So ready to bring this monster to life!)

I have to admit that when you said Hard R, I ( ... )

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anxioussquirrel December 26 2011, 12:41:23 UTC
I changed the "hard R" to just "R" after your comment, because you're right, it may have been so much further for them, but objectively it doesn't qualify for hard R, I guess.

So are you saying that I write tears-provoking smut?;) The good kind of tears, I hope!

I'm a bit sad that this 'verse is ending, but so excited for new multichapters! I have 3 more in my head right now (1 WIP, 1 starting this week). Plus, that monster to raise with you (YAY!!), 2 projects with the Unholy Triad and an idea for an original novel. So much fun!

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punkkitten2113 December 27 2011, 02:42:15 UTC
It was MONUMENTAL for them, and I'm so happy they got there...I just thought you were teasing me with all the rug talk.... ;)

Yes, absolutely the good kind of tears. I can't tell you how full of FEELINGS I get every time I read something of yours. These boys love each other so. hard.

YAY for all your new projects! I am so excited. Hugs for the monster for sure. And ooh, original novel? PM Details??? *chin fists*

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anxioussquirrel December 30 2011, 14:13:16 UTC
GOOD. Giving people FEELINGS with my stories is my goal ;)

No disclosing any details about the original novel idea yet;) It's still gestating:P

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gottriplets December 21 2011, 13:36:30 UTC
asdfjkl; unf...

Go Blaine! Shower sex FTW!!

Once again you have made me speechless....I love your writing!! Can't wait for my Christmas present, but I don't want this fic to end!

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anxioussquirrel December 26 2011, 12:43:55 UTC
Yay, thank you so much!:D

Oh, don't worry, I have a lot of other good things planned! Both angsty AND fluffy (separate 'verses, so you get to choose).

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mimiheart December 21 2011, 13:48:46 UTC
I love it all. So sweet and tender and loving and perfect and trusting and intimate and and and and... <3

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anxioussquirrel December 26 2011, 12:44:26 UTC
... and I love you <3

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fara1903 December 21 2011, 13:52:28 UTC
That was beautiful! So happy for them!

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anxioussquirrel December 26 2011, 12:44:42 UTC
Thank you! :)

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