Ficlet: ER, "But Can You Dance To It?"

[anxietygrrl]

Oh dear. I'm rusty, but I appear to be writing...things.

At this rate maybe I'm only three more conversations-that-end-in-makeouts away from a five things fic?

Title: "But Can You Dance To It?"
Fandom: ER, Neela/Ray (post-series)
Word count: 500
Notes: Embarrassingly sappy.

Comments

[lowriseflare]

I DON'T KNOW WHAT HAS GOTTEN INTO YOU, SIR, BUT I LIKE IT VERY MUCH.

(Also, I love how the dialogue is so them--even without speech tags it never gets confusing who's saying what. SO RIGHT ON.)

[anxietygrrl]

Thank you! Hooray! The actual writing is still feeling really clunky and am I doing this right?, but that makes me feel better about sharing the results.

[jesshelga]

"Dr. Pitchfork." It's a proportional-since-we're-talking-about-tv tragedy Ray Barnett never got to call Neela Rasgotra that.

[anxietygrrl]

That was a last minute addition so I'm glad you approve.

[profshallowness]

Bossiest muse ever! But oh, I can just see him playing the song that way.