Comments | anunfounddoor: HSM; Chad/Ryan; NC-17

anunfounddoor

HSM; Chad/Ryan; NC-17

Jan 09, 2008 14:13

Title: Oblivious
Author: coffeewordangel
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Not mine, not real.
Summary: Chad really should pay more attention.

( everyone knows when they look at us )

Comments 47

soavantgarde January 9 2008, 21:44:38 UTC

Hahaha, loved it! The dialogue was so good, I loved your Chad. :)

coffeewordangel January 10 2008, 20:49:15 UTC

Thank you so much! Snarky dialogue is terribly fun to write. ;)

hpdm_fangirl January 9 2008, 22:01:06 UTC

You make the best Chyan fics. xD

Loved it. ♥

coffeewordangel January 10 2008, 20:49:44 UTC

Aww, thank you! :)

stareyednight January 9 2008, 22:22:11 UTC

Heee, I love it. Very very cool and the dialogue was spot on. I love Gabi just sort of assuming and everyone else getting there much before Chad. The need between Chad and Ryan was so palpable and I really like Chad reaches out and drags Ryan to his chest, hands firm on his hips, and proceeds to kiss him the way he’s been fantasizing about since summer ended ... He’s touching Ryan again, tasting him and it’s so good he could fucking cry. Ryan’s melted against him, fingers flirting with the skin at Chad‘s waist, and it’s perfect.

So, in conclusion: Awesome.

coffeewordangel January 10 2008, 20:58:38 UTC

Thank you so much! I kind of just really like writing Chad and Ryan snarky dialogue. *g*

lielabell January 9 2008, 22:23:44 UTC

*love* You are the best.

coffeewordangel January 10 2008, 20:59:02 UTC

*blushes* Thank you!

winrym January 9 2008, 22:36:15 UTC

coffeewordangel January 10 2008, 20:59:27 UTC

Thank you so much! :)