Comments | antrazi: Pretty

antrazi

Pretty

Jun 04, 2012 20:50

Pretty
He really hated that word

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length: 500-1000, char: dean, time: unclear, char: oc

Comments 10

jennytork June 4 2012, 20:04:56 UTC

Oh, I LOVED THIS!!!

antrazi June 5 2012, 05:38:41 UTC

Thanks :)

borgmama1of5 June 4 2012, 20:12:37 UTC

Our Dean has good taste, he's not always shallow :)

I loved his analysis :)

antrazi June 5 2012, 05:42:54 UTC

Yes, he has, he goes for the one with taste in music.
You mean him checking and categorizing the women in the bar? Well, he is the guy for no further complications...

rince1wind June 5 2012, 06:14:32 UTC

I liked this a lot--you handled the numerous POVs really well -- especially the surprise witch at the end!

antrazi June 5 2012, 06:19:33 UTC

I planned her from the start but her ending up a witch was a surprise even for me.

darklondonsky June 5 2012, 14:43:40 UTC

Wow, really enjoyed this one. Poor lad, Dean ;-)
<3

antrazi June 5 2012, 18:28:09 UTC

Thanks.
I think he enjoys the benefits enough that he can live with it

metallidean_grl June 7 2012, 03:56:42 UTC

Despite his ways, Dean does have discerning tastes. Loved it how he went with the untypical girl. That's just awesome!!

antrazi June 7 2012, 08:32:51 UTC

Thanks. I didn't think Dean would limit himself more than necessary in his choices.