Could I get a bit of feedback?
As you've probably guessed by now, I'm a writer. A fantasy writer. Like quite a lot of you, as a matter of fact.
I'm working on a world where magic originates from binding one's soul to elemental spirits to gain power. To that end, I've written up a list of seventy-bleedin'-two spirits for reference.
http://sinestris.livejournal.com/tag/spirits
Could you have a quick look and tell me if you spot anything openly retarded?