DeathStar Fic <3

[antiquitydreams]

Title: Does it really taste like strawberries?
Rating: pg13
Pairing: Black Star x Death The Kid
Warnings: Snogging, heavy petting… I gloss over details mostly.
Disclaimers: I don’t own them; never have, never will. I just like to make them dance for my own personal amusement… I swear I’ll put them back when I’m done :D!
Authors Notes:  I wrote this for

Comments

[antiqueangels]

I was going to review on fanfiction but decided to do it here instead. ^^ Don't ask why. I'm very weird.

I really like the way you word things - it's probably one of my favorite things in your writing. You use a wider range of vocabulary than most ff writers. >.>

Is that really why Kid is like that? Because of his mom? I'm only on chapter 4 in the manga so I haven't really gotten so far....I'm reading quite a few manga. Soul Eater, Tales of Symphonia/Abyss, anything .hack, and all of Kaori Yuuki's work - I had read some already but...am going back cause I forgot. ^^; And because Kaori Yuuki is my favorite manga-ka soooooo....I'm done ADD-ing on that. lol.

Ah Star, I love how much of an attention whore he is. It's cool how you gave him more of a human side too - the feeling of needing someone, same with Kid. I love Soul and Star's friendship! Their little scene in Chapter 3 was all touching, when Star tried to wield him but failed and then hugged....and got shot by Kid. I think that was when I fell for Kid's character, he's definitely my favorite. XD But yeah, Soul and Star's friendship is wonderfully, touchingly cracky. XD

Aaah, you got Maka and her father perfectly! 8D I feel sorry for the guy. lol. He just wants a hug from his daughter, you know he'd be soaring if he got one. X3

Kid KO's himself....LOL.

I love how they ended up licking lube off of each other. and how Kid just HAD to draw the star on his other shoulder before going any further. XD That's so Kid. Symmetrical till death - even when drunk. X3

In case you can't tell, I really liked the fic! 8D Off to FF to fav! <3

SMOOCHES
MUCH LOVE

[antiquitydreams]

Lol I have no idea if it is or isn't, I just made that whole thing up. I figured it made sense because as far as I've read, we've haven't ever been introduced to Kid's mom. Or know much of anything about his family line. Maaaaybe it has been brought up already and I just haven't read that far but yeah. So far, nothing.

So I figured I'd explain it and this is what I came up with.

I'm glad you liked it so much :D! I feel a little deflated when I write because I usually get so few comments or responses that tell me anything. Lacking reviews give me little motive to continue writing >.< bla.

[antiqueangels]

It's a convincing back story for Kid. You can blame so much on your parents. It's almost scary how much of an impact the things they do have on their kids. O.o

I did like it. It was my first Soul Eater fan fiction, my Soul Eater Fan fiction cherry has been popped! LOL. jk. Lack of response does suck. D8 I shall pimp you! >3