Oh that's wonderful! The characterizations are perfect, as well as the tone and syntax. And the fish! I hate those stupid games with the fish; it's animal abuse. Mute's my new hero! Now I want to go out and rescue all those poor fish.
That was beautiful. <3 I loved the clear imagery of the scene, the obvious care that Fakir holds for Myuto, the tenderness and compassion of the still-heartless prince. The wording was pretty and delicate. Wonderful job.
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Thank's for fixing the link!
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