fic - accidentally - star trek rps

[antihysteric]

Title: Accidentally
Pairing: Chris/Zach (ST:XI RPS)
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: c.7,100 (wtf)
Disclaimer: This is a completely fictional story written about fictional constructs of real people. I make no profit; I do not know these people; and I intend no disrespect whatsoever.
Notes: I apologize in advance, for lo! and for woe!, I'm a dirty,

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[angstbunny]

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I don't even know WHERE to begin omg, I think I'm gonna have to come back and leave you a more proper comment when I'm coherent and I have more time. But this is like EPIC WIN. Like serious total EPIC WIN, and I love this so much. SO MUCH.

I SQUEALED OUT LOUD LIKE 293748 TIMES

This is a stupendously awesome fic. :FKJFKLDSF:LDKSF

[antihysteric]

aw, thank you so much! This comment makes me smile stupidly wide. ♥

[screamlet]

LOVE

[antihysteric]

<33333

[moralimperative]

i haven't finished yet, BUT! i wanted to share this about the line drawn in the sand! i know close to zilch about texas history (this was actually the only lesson in texan history i've ever had, truth be told), but back in the age prior to the roman empire, when the romans were still fierce men, there was another story of the "line drawn in the sand." it was a roman ambassador who had traveled to carthage after the first punic war, and he was standing before the king and senate of carthage to discuss the reparation costs carthage owed the romans. basically, it had happened like the end of the first world war: the romans and carthaginians had agreed to a certain number of thing carthage had to do/pay for, but after they'd made the agreement, the romans kept changing it, and demanding more

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[moralimperative]

i think everyone on your page is lightyears more advanced than me in english, because there were times i wondered if i was intelligent enough to actually read this fic. but it was WORTH IT!

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[antihysteric]

I think that just means I'm unbearably pretentious! But I really do appreciate you slogging through -- and that history anecdote is awesome! I did not know that, and now I do. So thank you, really very much! <3

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[moralimperative]

i'll just have to read it again and crack open a dictionary lol

aw yay :D i'm glad you liked it, too! the punic wars are one of my favorite periods in history. ancient history is the biggest crack ever for me, everything from the egyptians to the mongolians.

[leupagus]

This is seriously. Seriously. So great, and so amazing. I loved it. The scrabble scene killed me dead.

And this! THIS:

What comes out in lieu of anything suave is, "Well, our friends mauled me with a cluebat," and Zach freezes with a forkful halfway to his mouth. After a second he moves again, like someone depressed the play button and he's hoping no one notices pause was ever pushed.

IT'S LIKE TWO SENTENCES OF PERFECT IN ONE. Also "mauling x with the cluebat" is totally going to be my new catchphrase.

[antihysteric]

Yay! Thank you so much! I was admittedly worried this would come across as a cheap ripoff, so I'm really glad you liked it.

*writes out a creative commons license for you*

[leupagus]

Dude, the world needs many, many more stories where Chris is an oblivious kind-of-douchey-sweetheart and Zach is a mopey lovestruck kind of snobby wordophile. Do not apologize. Write another one.

[leupagus]

GOD I AM REREADING THIS AND I MUST'VE SKIPPED OVER THIS LINE:

Zach opens with QUARTZY and tries so hard to look nonchalant that if he tried any harder he'd actually be examining his fingernails.

It's like Christmas wrapped up in birthdays, for realsies.

[fizzerbass]

If you think this is a disappointment, I'd hate love to see what your idea of a crowning achievement might be. Perhaps this fic should look in the "get a clue, you're brilliant" mirror, hmmm?

Chopstick porn!
Cheatery!
Chris's hand on Zach's forearm!
Ordering the wrong milkshake!
Hypothetical prom face-punching!
"Hi."!

Really, who could ask for anything more? Well, I could. I could read approximately seventy-kazillion more words of this. :)

[antihysteric]

eep, thank you so much! I love it when people pick out their favorite bits.