Villain - Chapter 4

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http://antihero-truheo.blogspot.com/2012/11/chapter-4.html

I feel like the pacing might be too slow, but people are telling me it's because I'm not used to writing original fiction and having to develop the characters first.  I DON'T KNOW.  I JUST WANNA GET TO THE EXCITING SHIT ALREADY. D: