1sentence: Hisagi Shuuhei x Kira Izuru

[antha_aryn]

Fandom: Bleach
Author: Antharyn or antha_aryn
Pairing: Hisagi Shuuhei/Kira Izuru
Theme set: Delta @ 1sentence
Rating: PG-13 for boylove and mentions of sex?
Notes: 50 sentences didn't seem so hard about a month ago but believe me when I say I had to milk myself for all my worth just to get this out! And I still don't like it all that much but hey, like I always say:

Comments

[antha_aryn]

I know the tenses are pretty much an eyesore to read this time around but I wrote most of it at like 2 a.m. 'cause I was getting VERY frustrated that the damn plot bunny wouldn't let me get started on studying for my midterms which are like...tomorrow. X.x

But thank you for reading and commenting!!! ♥

I'll work out these tenses one day! You'll see! XD

[antha_aryn]

<3

Thanks for the offer! I'll definitely take you up on that the next time my tenses make me go o.O;

♥

[silverharmony]

Oh, yay, a one-sentence set! I was wondering if one would ever come up for this pairing. And this one was so uniquely structured - it was refreshing to read. Nice job ♥

Just one thing that caught my eye, though: I noticed that you used 'blonde' several times for Kira's hair? It's not wrong or anything, but 'blonde' is a lot more feminine in nature, whereas generally 'blond' is more masculine/used for men. If you like 'blonde' better though, just ignore me. XD

...You know, you should make a ShuuKira community. *hints and nudges* XD

[antha_aryn]

Yeah the 'e' sort of just writes itself there everytime I use the word and I never really thought about it but I suppose I should use it correctly next time! Thanks for the tip!

And I'd love for there to be a Shuukira comm but it would probably just die out or be really, really stagnant since the pairing is SO rare!

I only know of only one other author who actually writes about the pairing aside from you and me, though I have noticed people mention them as a side pairing in their fics nowadays so yey for that!

MORE LOVE TO MY OTP!!! T_T

Many ♥'s for reading and commenting!

[silverharmony]

You're welcome! And oh, yay indeed! I've only seen a very small number of fics so far where they're a side pairing, so I hope to see more, too.

And I'd love for there to be a Shuukira comm but it would probably just die out or be really, really stagnant since the pairing is SO rare!

On the other hand, having one exist might get people interested, join and write. And if there was a special ShuuKira community to post to, both of us would probably write more *winks* xD

[antha_aryn]

A shuukira comm. That wouldn't even require much mod-ing, would it?

ARGH.

SO.

TEMPTING.

Ahm. Uhm. Er.

I'LL GET BACK TO YOU ON IT AFTER MY MIDTERMS!!! XD

[annieroo2]

I really liked this. It was interesting, sweet and entertaining. Besides it looks hard as hell to write!

As i know most of you here are writers you will think this is stupid question, but it's driving me nuts not to know. I get the 50 words as a topic for each sentence but the numbers being out of order has me clueless. Is anyone willing to explain this to me or should i just get bent?

[antha_aryn]

Thank you! Glad you liked! ♥

And yes, this was was hella hard to write! For me at least. Had me wracking my brains in a desperate attempt to finish it. ::is ashamed::

And yeah, according to the mechanics of 1sentence, each word is a numbered theme and I tried my hardest to get them done by order and I did fine for the most part but alas, 10 or so words refused to let me do so completely.

So I had to jumble them up and stick the words where I could. The rules say I can so yey!

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

[nnoi]

*loves*

[antha_aryn]

♥