and yet I love writing at the novella length. allegedly.

Aug 10, 2010 12:41

GAH plot. GAH structure. GAH the need to build to minor climaxes while ratcheting up the tension overall. GAH my brain's insistence on doing this while working toward a moment of pure id-crack that was the simple prompt I was supposed to write four months ago. But it is time to drive this one to completion single-mindedly, while improving my chops at solving various plotting problems. What I need to do now is step back and re-outline. Perhaps I will start by writing a simple synopsis. That'll be less intimidating.

khaoschilde's manip #1 (worksafe) is providing inspiration for a specific post-fight scene.

Hang power cleans are pretty cool. That woman is doing them with the bare bar, which is 20kg (44#). I did them yesterday at 95#, working on pure form. I also did some straight power cleans, starting from the deadlift position. Lots of jargon there, huh?

"Clean" is the ending position: bar at shoulder level.
"Hang" means starting with the bar held mid-thigh.
"Power" means you don't drop under the bar to receive it; your hip drive must be enough to send it up to your shoulders.
In the full clean, sometimes called a "squat clean", you drop down under the bar to catch it, then stand up. The last vid link shows a guy doing them instead of a woman, but he explains it really well.

And that's one of the things I do at the gym these days. My goal is to do Crossfit Linda some day. Yes, that woman is very fit, but she still struggles with the bench press. 120# was probably too ambitious for her. It's cool to watch her push through it and get them done anyway. Makes me believe I can get there too. Some day.

Random: Sharpie Liquid Pencil. Is erasable like pencil, then sets like ink after three days. Must try!

life explosion, random

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