Well, that's a complete draft, without any notes to self or unwritten bits. It has a title and a thematic whatsit and everything. It also probably doesn't have any un-deliberate ungrammaticalities any more.
I think I'll give it 24 hours of pretending I'm thinking about it, then just post it without looking at it again.
Random: Continuing the week's musical theme, here's a cover of
"Taking Tiger Mountain". Available for
free download from the musicians.