FIC: Sweat (Giles/Buffy, FRAO)

[antennapedia]

Title: Sweat
Prompt: 28. Dominant
Pairing: Giles/Buffy
Rating: FRAO
Word count: 2100
Table: Complete smut_69 prompt table
Notes: Blackmail continuation. BDSM kink, heavy on the SM in this one.

Comments

Finally!

[carlaland]

**hugs**

I have been haunting my inbox for this all weekend, this part in particular. I like the way Buffy acknowledges to herself that she is inexperienced in this but is confident enough to know that this is something she wants and is willing to learn how to get it. I cannot wait for the rest and am somewhat bitter that we all have to work and can't just write and read all day! The longer I sit here and comment, the happier with this story I get.

Re: Finally!

[antennapedia]

You know how to make a writer happy!

I'll do my best to get the next bits posted. Two more parts planned. But yeah, work will definitely interfere.

[secondalto]

I'm really enjoying these little snippets.

I love that Buffy knows enough about her Slayerness not to worry about how hard she can be with the crop and flogger. She's confident and I like Buffy like that.

I look forward to more.

[antennapedia]

Buffy Triumphant! I like her like that too. Knows what she's doing. Knows she can throw a knife and nail a mosquito from across the room. Go Buffy!

[fuzzyboo03]

Oh my. Another wonderful part. I really loved the detail that she tied him with knots he had taught her.

[antennapedia]

I like that little Boy Scouts "be prepared" irony too. Hee! We'll see if I can get the next part up tonight. This next one, unlike the others wasn't already nearly complete when I got started posting.

[nutterbudgie]

hah oh yeah i hadta dig out 'bang a gong' just to see if there was some deep emo message to this - nope, pr0n :D

this reminds me of 'prophecy girl'(?) when she threw the books at him. he flinched & looked at the floor while she yelled how useless he was. not a behaviour i would expect from a mature male dealing with a hysterical 16yr old. not council approved behaviour.
his 'slayer worship' has long been established in MY mind, but it is nice here to see buffy show those little gentlenesses to HIM now - even if she is whipping him to blood.

[antennapedia]

First the hurt and then the comfort, I say. And then the sex.

I do sometimes put little coded messages in the music field :) Though I suppose that song would be more appropriate for the next section...

[headrush100]

Fanning myself here. Beautifully done - stern but surrender on both sides. Very much looking forward to the next bit!

[antennapedia]

Mmmmm, icon love! *hands you bottle of spring water*