Yeah, okay, this sort of happened. What the hell. It needs another draft at least, but I am feeling impatient. Either it gets another draft or I abandon it entirely because I'm not sure I can make the transitional moment work
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I gotta do something about the opening & the ending, though. Language isn't quite under control enough. Okay, another spin on it, and I'll let it loose.
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I wouldn't question the characterization.
Loved it all.
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