Fic: Phalaenopsis

[antelope_writes]

Title: Phalaenopsis
Characters/Pairings: Toshiko, Jack (gen)
Rating: PG for themes and very minor language
Spoilers: Big ones for 2x12 "Fragments"
Disclaimer: This is a work of fanfiction, done for the love and not for any money at all.

Summary: "Toshiko, at least twenty other brilliant minds thought what you did was impossible."

Author's notes:

Comments

[fmanalyst]

Brilliant! You do a lovely job of setting up the canon relationship between them. But why the changes in font sizes?

[antelope_writes]

Because it took me over an hour to get this even posted, what with LJ being such a pain in the caboose, and i'm not entirely sure why the repeated tries at getting the font sizes (and fonts, for that matter) to be the same didn't work. Very frustrating.

But thank you.

[fmanalyst]

I figured it must be something like that. LJ has been very odd lately.

[antelope_writes]

Thanks! This fic may turn into a 2- or 3-parter, depending on the muse.

I think the whole of S2, save perhaps Something Borrowed and Adrift (which was well-done), would have been better as 2-parters...look at how the Owen arc turned out. Certainly Sleeper, Adam, FOOTR and Fragments could have been improved by that, and I'd argue that KKBB and EW are a 2-parter separated by time.

[kel_reiley]

yay! it's up!!
*goes back to read*

[scissorknot]

That was really good. Thanks for sharing it.

[spoggly]

I adore this - beautifully done!

[antelope_writes]

Thank you!

Man, totally digging all the Tosh icons showing up. Great stuff.