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[Konishi]

Sep 20, 2009 00:10

by myaru

( May Fifth )

sub: myaru, round 008

Comments 7

anonymous September 20 2009, 15:28:50 UTC

It has a lovely feel to it! <3

anonymous September 20 2009, 19:58:19 UTC

This is so sad, but so beautifully done. Especially that last line. *Sniff*

stirring_still September 20 2009, 21:14:00 UTC

Tenderly and carefully written, this, and nicely understated. Lovely.

anonymous September 21 2009, 02:08:58 UTC

I love this. It feels real, that a death can keep them apart, and another has the potential to bring them back together. It feel like Touya can finally understand, if Hikaru just lets him.

issen4 September 21 2009, 04:33:29 UTC

It feels like there should be more of this. But the writing's strong, especially of Touya Kouyo's death and the parts about Akira as a child.