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therhoda May 6 2009, 03:10:14 UTC
wow, the depth tot his one was really there. Choices are always such a hard thing.

I liked how she found herself, it wasa't the man it was aboout herself. great job showing how a life can be lived or just gotten through.

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trixie_chick May 16 2009, 08:05:36 UTC
*bluuush* thank you! so glad you liked it. yes, it was necessary for her to start choosing for herself.

thankyou!!

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issen4 May 6 2009, 04:50:12 UTC
Whoa! The format of linked drabbles works really well, and the way it explored the changes in her life and how she made her choices is excellent. You're both talented and skilled.

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trixie_chick May 16 2009, 08:06:09 UTC
thank you, glad you thought so! (thanks for the rec, too!) so very glad you enjoyed! *blushes!*

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lundi May 6 2009, 05:11:16 UTC
Great job with this! I love that you explain her decisions with her actions rather than words. Your style here is stunning, as well.

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trixie_chick May 16 2009, 08:06:26 UTC
thank you very much! *blushes!* glad you enjoyed. ^___^

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flyby311 May 6 2009, 07:41:53 UTC
Very nice. Each piece just flowed to the next and the sense of... hmm... gentleness, quiet, not placid exactly, but not raging either--in any case, that was well written.

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trixie_chick May 16 2009, 08:06:51 UTC
*blush* thank you, that was pretty much the feeling i was going for. ^_~ glad you enjoyed!

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trixie_chick May 16 2009, 08:10:50 UTC
thank you! *blushes*

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