Whoa! The format of linked drabbles works really well, and the way it explored the changes in her life and how she made her choices is excellent. You're both talented and skilled.
Very nice. Each piece just flowed to the next and the sense of... hmm... gentleness, quiet, not placid exactly, but not raging either--in any case, that was well written.
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I liked how she found herself, it wasa't the man it was aboout herself. great job showing how a life can be lived or just gotten through.
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thankyou!!
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