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[Tomosaki]

Sep 19, 2008 00:02

[SMUT] MADONNA
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( [Tomosaki] Madonna )

Comments 14

anonymous September 20 2008, 15:30:37 UTC

I loved this. I love the way you've mixed in the sex with girl!Hikaru trying to find herself. The mix works very well.

[kanazawa]

usagimc September 21 2008, 01:15:02 UTC

Wow, that was really hot. and sexy. and just hot. lol ^_^

If you ever write more I would love to read it.

anonymous September 23 2008, 16:57:44 UTC

The title really should have given me a clue! Very hot.

[miura]

sivullinen September 30 2008, 13:52:28 UTC

Some sentences were a little confusing for me, but overall, I thought this was awesome! I liked Hikaru's issues and the way she was dealing with them and how Touya affected her ♥

etrangere October 4 2008, 00:01:27 UTC

Brilliant exploration of gender dynamics through Touya and Hikaru and hot as well. Loved it!