[hachette]

[answer_key]

ST. ELMO'S FIRE

by osmalic

Comments

[anonymous]

Ooooh, this is wonderful. I really liked how it progressed, and the story flowed. Some of the last lines between parts were genius.

I really liked this line too:

A stream of consciousness, a ball of contained memories and desire that makes him the ethereality of a human being, because the skin, bones, muscles are gone.

-Hartmann

[sarasusa]

I totally loved that line too!

[sleepingfingers]

This is really poignant and sad and tender. Some lines are just wonderful, and incredibly sad.

[measuringlife]

This is at turns heartbreaking and gorgeous, and it feels like it fits right into canon ♥

[sivullinen]

Wonderful! While there are some fics a bit similar as this I love how this concentrates so much on that Sai was a ghost, and how that made him different! My heart breaks for those two, especially Hikaru D:

[anonymous]

Oh. This was beautifully poignant.

[kozak]