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May 05, 2008 00:25

MASTERY

by kishmet
[fisher] Mastery )

sub: kishmet, round 005

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sleepingfingers May 6 2008, 02:12:01 UTC
Oh. That's just. It's a brilliant AU fic, and I love the way you've patterned this after canon.

But oh, there'll be a sequel, no? Because this is brilliant and it is begging for one.

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sarasusa May 6 2008, 23:19:20 UTC
...waaah?

This is quite lovely, and the "Festival of Swords" scene was amazingly intense. But what a terrifyingly cryptic (at least to me) ending--I feel it can be read either way, and no matter what, the results won't be good for either of our heroes.

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ramble_corner May 7 2008, 00:55:26 UTC
Nice SwordMaster AU.
The open ending really made me wonder what's Touya going to do next.

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anonymous May 7 2008, 09:21:30 UTC
No, wait, what? You can't stop there, this was amazing and fantastic and WHOA. Where's the rest of this? You can't stop there! (This was amazing and fantastic, and I want more more more more!)

[kozak]

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anonymous May 7 2008, 11:10:09 UTC
And then he lets go.
And then you stop? :splutters:

That was brilliant: it's like the other side of the 'my sword can touch you now' metaphor and I can completely see Sai being deadly with a sword

[beard]

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