Putting the object at the front of the sentence gives "the added burden of a girlfriend" the emphasis I want. Possibly, it's also a personal stylistic affliction. :P
I really enjoyed typing that sentence about Touya. *g*
I don't think anyone in the HnG fandom ever gets tired of making fun of Akira's fashion sense. Coincidentally, though, I think that bee-striped tie absolutely adorable. And secretly, Hikaru does too. ;)
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Oh, Hikaru, you're so oblivious ♥
The added burden of a girlfriend he didn't need.
Shouldn't it be "He didn't need the added burden of a girlfriend?" It seems a bit awkward...
Touya Akira was equal to the burden of at least three different girlfriends.
SO TRUE.
Hikaru noticed that he was wearing that funny, bee-striped tie.
*snicker*. you'd think Akira would have gotten a better fashion sense by now.
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Putting the object at the front of the sentence gives "the added burden of a girlfriend" the emphasis I want. Possibly, it's also a personal stylistic affliction. :P
I really enjoyed typing that sentence about Touya. *g*
I don't think anyone in the HnG fandom ever gets tired of making fun of Akira's fashion sense. Coincidentally, though, I think that bee-striped tie absolutely adorable. And secretly, Hikaru does too. ;)
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