Prince of Tennis name cameos! *laughing* But learning Ashiwara throws games out of pity makes me sad. Poor boy. He's too soft. Ichikawa/Ogata! Ogata's "and you" for Saeki was so cold! Also. I feel so bad for Ashiwara.
Before I go on to read the rest I have to say that this is beautiful is and sharp and exactly what a life is--it's detailed and pretty in some places and full of moments that make up a day that make up a lifetime and I have to say that, so far, this is amazingly well done in that sense.
And I want to go on and talk about how well you do the little things, the bigger things, and how amazing this is in general and how much i really want to squee and fangirl and everything but i keep kind of looking at that "next part" link and...and i can't help it.
(and the fact that it took me so long to figure out it was Ashiwara and, oh god, poor Tashiro and POT cameos! and everything, ohmygod everything that was soutterlybrilliant)
"He runs past Ogata, who is wearing his white suit and talking to Kuwabara at the gift shop, past Touya, who is walking down the hall, past Morishita, who is following after Touya with a herd of reporters behind him. A part of his mind recalls that Touya and Morishita had a game today, but that part of his mind is quickly forgotten."
I think Ashiwara would refer to Touya at least as Touya-sensei, even in his mind, because he's part of Touya-sensei's study group. What he calls Ogata, Kuwabara and Morishita in his mind is up for debate I guess, although I think he'll be polite, even in his mind. :)
Anyway, the thought of Ogata as an insei is really funny! And even funnier is the thought that he was heckled by Kuwabara even as an insei...
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I guess I'd better keep reading and find out!
(I want to secretly hope he does, because I just never get enough Ogata, but you've got me rooting for Saeki/Ashiwara now!)
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And I want to go on and talk about how well you do the little things, the bigger things, and how amazing this is in general and how much i really want to squee and fangirl and everything but i keep kind of looking at that "next part" link and...and i can't help it.
(and the fact that it took me so long to figure out it was Ashiwara and, oh god, poor Tashiro and POT cameos! and everything, ohmygod everything that was soutterlybrilliant)
*clicks*
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I think Ashiwara would refer to Touya at least as Touya-sensei, even in his mind, because he's part of Touya-sensei's study group. What he calls Ogata, Kuwabara and Morishita in his mind is up for debate I guess, although I think he'll be polite, even in his mind. :)
Anyway, the thought of Ogata as an insei is really funny! And even funnier is the thought that he was heckled by Kuwabara even as an insei...
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standing on the edge of fate part had me gasping in delight. How wonderful!
And now I nearly have tears in my eyes for Ashiwara. Poor boy :(
*hurries off to read the next part*
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