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[Shusai]

Dec 29, 2006 16:53

SNOWFALL
by zoesque

( [Shusai] Snowfall )

sub: zoesque, round 002

Comments 7

anonymous December 30 2006, 03:02:50 UTC

Oh. My goodness. HOW SWEET. I love it.

anonymous December 30 2006, 03:25:25 UTC

So cute! Cute, cute, cute. And did I mention cute?

qem_chibati January 2 2007, 03:35:42 UTC

Aww. This was really sweet to read.

sivullinen January 2 2007, 15:04:51 UTC

I really liked the subtle hints in this, such as "Shindou gets off at the same stop Akira does, as he has been doing more and more throughout winter's approach, gradually as the first tentative layer of snow" and "Shindou makes a small noise that sounds a bit like the one Akira has been muffling in his pillow for months now, and it's like a jolt down his spine: that this has been here, all along."

On the whole, this was adorable <3

mousapelli January 6 2007, 05:59:14 UTC

Shindou makes a small noise that sounds a bit like the one Akira has been muffling in his pillow for months now,
asdlfjadlfka HOT.

awesome and sweet. loved it!