[ayatori]

[answer_key]

by trixie_chick

Comments

[anonymous]

Wow, this is really amazing, because you've managed to make Kuwabara a sympathetic character while still having him be Kuwabara with his many unsympathetic characteristics.

Two of my favorite bits:
-He didn't hate her mother, but right after they lost their son, she took his daughter away. Even if he did still love her, he wasn't sure he could forgive her.
-Jealousy tasted worse than cold tea, so he took another sip.

Thank you!

-kami-zumo

[trixie_chick]

kuwabara needs lovin'! ^_~ glad you enjoyed it!! and heh, i liked those lines, too.

thankyousomuch!!

[trixie_chick]

heh, that's a true joy of ficcing... getting people to see new sides to characters they don't even think about. ^_~ glad you liked it!!

thank you so much!

[etrangere]

Lovely and poignant!!

[trixie_chick]

thank you very much!!

[tani]

I liked this more than I would have thought I'd like any fic about Kuwabara. You did a wonderful job of making him sympathetic, and I liked seeing his reasoning for things, as well as what he's like in a more private setting. I do feel bad about his marriages now, but I'm sure he'll have a wonderful time with his new grandson! (I think I'll think of this story the next time I encounter him in canon. I'll probably snicker to myself at the thought of him with his new grandson.)

[trixie_chick]

thank you!! glad to get you to enjoy some kuwabaraness. ^_~ yes, he's had a stormy path, but that kid is definitely going to be spoiled.

(I think I'll think of this story the next time I encounter him in canon. I'll probably snicker to myself at the thought of him with his new grandson.)

aww, thank you, that's such a huge compliment!!! *blushbeams!!*

thankyou!!

[flonnebonne]

Ah! This was lovely. Kuwabara's relationship with his first wife seemed very realistic.

[trixie_chick]

thank you very much!! ^__^