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[abiadura]

Feb 21, 2011 01:40

by metisket

( The Trouble with Tournaments )

mini-round 003: all or nothing, sub: metisket

Comments 18

psunym February 22 2011, 03:52:10 UTC

Hilarious!! I like how it all flows smoothly and that I can follow each scene without going "huh?? who's talking again?" or something like that. Thanks!

metisket March 1 2011, 05:56:02 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad it flowed! Haha, I had fun writing it. Possibly...way too much fun. XD

tuuli_chan February 22 2011, 17:24:27 UTC

psunym's comment could be written by me. This fic really gave me a good laugh. "they're in the middle of... something..." XD

metisket March 1 2011, 05:57:21 UTC

Thank you so much! Heh, sometimes it must be sort of exhausting, being Touya's dad. XD

anonymous February 24 2011, 22:01:18 UTC

This is hilarious! You've got their voices down so well.

I loved this line espescially:
“Look what you did, Waya. You made Touya scream in my ear first thing in the morning. Before breakfast! This headache I’ve got right now? It’s not going away all day.”

spoed

metisket March 1 2011, 05:58:22 UTC

Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

Waya <3. Some days he'd be the most awesome friend ever. And then there would be those other days... XD

anonymous February 25 2011, 00:56:41 UTC

Ha, Ha, Ha! It was funny. I loved it. Thanks for sharing.

metisket March 1 2011, 05:58:50 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. ^_^

anonymous February 25 2011, 09:08:26 UTC

This is hilarious and totally delightful and totally in-character. Wonderful job! I can't even tell what part I especially love because it's all so much fun. ♥

nopeus

metisket March 1 2011, 06:00:02 UTC

:D Yay! I'm really glad you liked it! ♥

It was, like. Criminally fun to write, so I'm glad it was fun to read, too. ^_^