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Sep 20, 2010 07:16

round 010, sub: issen4

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anonymous September 21 2010, 07:29:46 UTC
This is simultaneously precious and funny. I like how Hikaru carefully explains technology to Sai in a very Hikaru-ish way. And mechanical goldfish! I want one~~~

Sai pronounced the word "robot" laboriously, as though foreign loanwords were a thousand times more difficult like "damezumari".

Hahah, that's funny. I can see him scrunching up his nose as he says it.

The exploding goldfish was a perfect ending.

-chahan

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issen4 October 4 2010, 14:08:26 UTC
Ack, I spot my typo up there! But I'm glad you like this fic and thanks for commenting!

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anonymous September 21 2010, 18:40:27 UTC
This is silly and much fun!

- Lekei

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issen4 October 4 2010, 14:09:53 UTC
Was in the mood for something silly. Thanks for reading!

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lucathia_rykatu September 23 2010, 20:04:29 UTC
The exploding fish were a bit disturbing and sad. But seeing Hikaru and Sai marveling at them together was cute.

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issen4 October 4 2010, 14:11:00 UTC
Don't worry, I'm sure they'll perfect the technology in no time. ^__^ Glad you enjoyed this, and thanks for reading!

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amaresu June 30 2011, 04:22:26 UTC
After reading this for the first time I was re-watching the anime and couldn't help but notice the fish tank in the background everytime they passed it. Especially in the scene where the tank is covered and has a sign about it being closed for maintenance. I had to pause the show while I laughed because I immediately thought of this fic.

Anyways, this is hilarious and well done.

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