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[bonito]

Sep 20, 2010 07:02

by ee970

( Life Goes )

round 010, sub: ee970

Comments 5

anonymous September 21 2010, 01:14:21 UTC

Nicely done. It hurts to lose, but it fades. You captured this perfectly.

- Lekei

lucathia_rykatu September 23 2010, 07:35:46 UTC

What a quiet and beautiful piece. I thought the moment with his mom was quite sweet!

anonymous October 1 2010, 17:06:05 UTC

I found this a touching look at the later stages of bereavement, sensitively done. And Hikaru is so alone in this, because he has lost someone that no one else knew was there.

- kotteri

perriotoi October 2 2010, 02:53:58 UTC

I felt this was a well done fic on learning to move on. Very lovely.

anonymous October 4 2010, 07:59:27 UTC

Perfectly told, through setup and resolution, a real gem.