{Series} I'm Here for You - Chapter 1

[sugarytwinkle]

Title: I'm Here For You - Chapter 1
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Tegoshi/OC, Tegoshi/Masuda
Beta: crazyfaucet (because she's amazing^^)
Summary: There is always a glimmer of hope.
Warnings: Self Injury
Disclaimer: I do not own these people. If I did, I would not be pairing them up; I would keep them to myself. If I did this, I would be attacked by fangirls.

Comments

[hyde95]

This chapter is long and very interesting. I love the way Miyabi acts like a robot at the beginning, and then she changes, and the voice in her head, they sound so evil, so rude, I felt like they were in my head. It made me sad, and mad. I think you did it pretty well.

Tegoshi's behaviour changes too. He's like the Tegoshi we all know, trying to seduce the girl, but then he's so sooo kind with her..

And the end,"there is somebody who cares. Fuck you, voices" is perfect. You asked me if it was good for the end, and I do think it is.
Are you sure you didn't put a bit of yourself in Miyabi? I just..felt like it was you.

See, I didn't write a drabble this time, but I can't put words on the emotions this fic made me feel. Please, keep it up ! Love YOU.

[sugarytwinkle]

Thank you :)
I have voices like that myself, so I tried to put them into it.

Yeah, I put my mechanics into Miyabi. But, still, she isn't me. She's just got my mechanics~

I'm really glad that it made you feel something :) I love YOU too~

[aby_rose22]

ANGST. Literally. Why do I keep on imagining you as the girl here? >.< I don't want those bad things happening to you, I'll die seeing you like that. But yeah, it wasn't you so I'm still alive xDD

I love the ending part. The statement was just perfect. I hope you'll find someone like that too~

Next chap please? :D

[sugarytwinkle]

Don't die~ *hugs*

Aren't you kind of almost that person? xD

Soon^^ I'm glad you liked the ending :D Thank you for reading it ♥ ♥ *cwtch*