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fic: tiny little fractures (star trek: reboot)

Jan 08, 2012 21:51

McCoy/Chapel holiday exchange ficathon: hellokatzchen requested Chapel helping McCoy with some sort of intimate therapy and things getting a bit complicated ( Read more... )

star trek reboot, mccoy/chapel, pg rating, fandom, fic

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fringedweller January 8 2012, 11:26:30 UTC
Amazing story! I love how she warned him that she'd sedate him, and then went ahead and did it - she's very strong, your Christine, and that's what I love about how this comm has created her. She's a woman, yes, but one that will happily sedate her commanding officer if the idiot won't do as he's told.

Just brilliant.

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anr January 10 2012, 11:42:25 UTC
Thanks!! I'm really pleased you enjoyed the story so, and thought the characterisations worked so well. :)

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seren_ccd January 8 2012, 11:44:02 UTC
Oh, this is incredible. I love your Christine and of course he'd have trouble sleeping. I bet he's always had trouble sleeping. This is just amazing and I love the Oh.. That's quite possibly the best fade to black ever. :D

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anr January 10 2012, 11:41:59 UTC
Thanks, hon. I'm really pleased you enjoyed it so, and felt the characterisations (and fade-to-black, heh) worked so well. :)

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alaria January 8 2012, 11:56:15 UTC
This is lovely and funny :) I really like the realism of the story!

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anr January 10 2012, 11:41:13 UTC
Thank you!! :)

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syredronning January 8 2012, 13:45:57 UTC
Very believable, and very funny :)

hell, it's not like she hadn't told him she was going to sedate him if he didn't agree to go get some sleep, and it's not like he didn't then tell her to go right ahead and do that then, if she was so sure she was right, so.

*giggles* Yes, she would do that :)

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anr January 10 2012, 11:41:01 UTC
Thank you! That was one of my favourite sections to write, so I'm glad you enjoyed it so. :)

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leanstein January 8 2012, 13:53:09 UTC
This was amazing! I love Christine. She would so drug him. And the way you wrote this, the emotions, especially the desperation at the start, is so brilliant. Thank you.

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anr January 10 2012, 11:40:40 UTC
Thanks!! I'm glad you enjoyed the story so, and thought the characterisations worked. :)

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