Title: Never Alone
Author: anoukinparis
Pairing: YooSu ^^
Genre: Fluff, romance, AU (for references to the "bank world," see junsubabyx3's post about it xD)
A/N: Obviously, this was written for my lovely Junsu-ah, whose birthday has already passed, but I don't really care either way. xDD I wanted to do something special for her, and even though it's
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I thought it was your birthday?
*confused*
And, deary me, the fluff! Excuse me while I go roll around in it for a moment (hell knows it's softer than my mattress *nursing a cut from a spring*) and then comment.
We going to do the uber long comment thing with quotes and things, yes? YES.
'Yoochun put a quick finger to his lips, giving Junsu a glance out of the corner of his eye. There was a dramatic pause. “It’s a secret,” he whispered in a hushed tone.
Junsu just stared and nodded
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This reminds me of those typical movie-American boys when they're younger, and how they make promises, and tree houses, and time capsules, and it's always summer and there's always a rope dangling from their tree house, and there's always a lake nearby that they can swing on a tyre to drop into.
That kind of unabashed happiness, where every day is an adventure, and you're with people who you trust and who can make the simplest thing be something amazing, using the poer of their imagination.
I don't know.
But the atmosphere is very much like that. And the carving into the tree (ignoring the fact that it's a cliché that you made work, huzzah!) kind of adds to that.
So, yeah. Childhood summers.
Except adult ^_~
'watching as the other touched a part of his past that had never known anyone else’s touch'
Beautiful persepctive there. Kind of like he's reaching through all the years to touch at the 13 year old Yoochun. *blinkblink* That didn't sound so paedophilic in my head.
'It wasn’t long before the both of them realized that Junsu really wasn’t the best candidate in dealing with sharp objects
I grinned. Poor Junsu.
And the bit where he's feeling nervous and reaches out for Yoochun's hand, and then gets a little kiss?
*squee*
Mmhmm. I liked it.
(it was a little bit cheesy, but that was okay, because sometimes love's like that. And when you're singers who only know the clichés of - oh, wait, they're not here. Okay. And when you're Yoochun, the slimy, romantic bishie, it's probably always going to be like that.)
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Anyways. Yeah, it was my birthday when I posted this (18, woo!). But I can't really write birthday stories for myself. Well, I suppose I could...hmm…(maybe some JaeHo smut that I’ve been DYING to write for, I don’t know, forever now. Now that’s a birthday gift.)
Yes, the fluff. ^____^ I actually don't write too much of it, but when I do, I always tend to get caught up. It's just too cute. >>
And yeah, I know what you're talking about. That sort of nostalgic mood of the piece is what I was aiming for, but I just couldn't get rid of some of the cheesiness. It crept up on me, I swear. -sigh- The carving in the tree makes me think of a lot of those things too - budding romances and the summer sun and just feeling young and alive. Something like that. ^^
(…it didn’t to me either until you mentioned it. -laughs- Honestly, it’s kinda hard for me to imagine Junsu doing anything dirty. But that’s just how I see him.)
Awe. Yoochun, the slimy, romantic bishie. At least he’s not greasy at all. ^_~
As always, thanks for the wonderful, wonderful comment. They make me so happy.
Here’s some American cookies for your trouble~ -hands-
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*still only sixteen* How was your birthday? You're legal now, over there, right? ^_~ (that's a proper birthday gift. Do it. Gifts to yourself really are the best. No, really. XD)
I don't know if I write fluff. Sometimes I think I do, but then it turns into something else.
*nod* That's definitely the feeling that the piece gives. And that's okay - puns creep up on me when I'm tired (and bad language. Really bad language. I have a mouth like a sailor when I'm knackered). And the cheese didn't kill the piece, so don't fret too much ^_~
(I could see him doing it and then being totally innocent afterwards, like 'why are people fainting?'...but being kind of devious about it, as well.)
*laughs* no, but his large forehead is rather large and shiny these days ^_~ I'll love you even when you're bald, Chunnie, have no fear.
*clasps* Thank you~~
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-hugs!-
I’ve always wondered what it would be like to host one of those “free hugs” type of things…you know what I’m talking about? Holding out signs on the street, embracing anyone who needed some comfort, all that jazz. Yeah. I’d like to try that one day.
Anyways! Haha, I don’t mind you wanting gifts. ^__^ Besides, I just had a birthday, I have enough presents (like a magna doodle and cactus, hell yes!) But no, I’m still with my parents. Changing addresses. It’s just…complicated. (like what isn’t?) And I’ll spare you the knitty gritty details unless you ask; I’m not that good in determining what’s too much to say. xD Basically, I have a bunch of crap to go through and pack, and I’m definitely NOT looking forward to it. Bleh.
Ah, sixteen? I assumed you were my age for some reason. -laughs- My birthday went very well, thank you. ^_^ Modest, but I hate having huge parties.
Bahaha. Well, I’m legal in the sense that I can buy lottery tickets and own a house and legally purchase “adult movies” if I want to (Go porn!). But no alcohol, unfortunately. xD
You don’t appear to be much of a fluff kind of girl. But that’s good. I think there’s plenty of fluff out there. ^^ Ah, but thank you~
(I used to talk sweetly, but now I dread I’m getting worse…damnit.)
(YES! I could totally see that happening. Like, that sort of coy innocence that’s really not that innocent at all. I think Junsu knows what he’s doing. -imagines his hips- Mm. He makes me feel like a perv.)
-snugglesChunnie- xDD
Anytime. ^__^
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