Title: The Right Guy (oneshot)
Author: anoukinparis
Pairing: YunJae
Genre: Romance/Angst
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Yunho meets him by chance while bartending at a gay bar - a teasing, matter-a-fact, enigmatic stranger that quickly becomes a part of his life, whether Yunho is ready for it or not.
A/N: Maybe I'll write a sequel to this? I'm not sure, but I'm
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btw, that icon is love! xD
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it really means so much to me when readers leave thoughtful comments such as yours, giving their own opinions on the characters and story - it's fun for me as the writer! ^^ and everything you said about yunho and jae was incredibly spot-on, which just made me even happier~
thank you so, so much for reading :3 i'm really glad you enjoyed it and hope to see you again soon!
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I really like this Jae, too...he seems more like the "man" [so to speak] in the relationship than all other YunJae fics. But Yunho wasn't too girly either.
You did a great job. The dialogue was amazing, too. Definitely had me laughing.
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ahhh~ it really annoys me how some writers make him out to be this delicate, overly-feminine thing (one of my pet peeves as a yunjae writer xP) so i'm glad that you found this jae more manly ^^ he's all man to me anyways lmao xD
thank you, thank you! I had fun writing the dialogue ;)
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But most of all makes me wonder if Jae is actually brave enough to let go of this 'thing' with Yunho.
In their exchange we can see how they both are still anonymous to each others but, share just what it comes to be significant for them.
I like this mysterious Jae, so much of everything in between. He doesnt do relationships but, if he lingers too much into Yunho he might want just that. To me he doesn't want to have a broken heart.
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i think the last few things you said were very insightful. that's pretty much how i pictured jae's motives, escaping all potential hurting~ kudos to you ^^
thanks for reading, love~ <3
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I do have to agree the Jae here is more manly. He doesnt act girly at all he is just him, mysterious and a bit cold.
It actually makes me wonder if his past relationship had something to do with him being that way. There is a wall he puts to protect himself from everyone else.
Ohh what is going to happen?! CANT WAIT~!
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!
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YOU are awesome! and yesyes, i shall start on it!
thank you~~~
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