The Right Guy

May 22, 2009 07:14


Title: The Right Guy (oneshot)
Author: anoukinparis
Pairing: YunJae
Genre: Romance/Angst
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Yunho meets him by chance while bartending at a gay bar - a teasing, matter-a-fact, enigmatic stranger that quickly becomes a part of his life, whether Yunho is ready for it or not.

A/N: Maybe I'll write a sequel to this? I'm not sure, but I'm ( Read more... )

yunjae, oneshot, romance, angst

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moon1084 May 22 2009, 12:56:11 UTC
i dont blame u for loving this jae. he is incredibly sexy and mysterious and u really really need to write a sequel for this.

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anoukinparis May 22 2009, 13:32:02 UTC
8DDD thanks, love! and i'm definitely considering it~
btw, that icon is love! xD

<3

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moon1084 May 22 2009, 16:11:40 UTC
i will definitely look forward to the sequel then. thanks, i gotta show my yunjae pride

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anoukinparis May 22 2009, 21:07:54 UTC
yay for yunjae pride~ xD

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oldwillow_brook May 22 2009, 20:20:10 UTC
Im speechless. Just completely speechless. That was amazing. Just amazing. I don't even know what to say ( ... )

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anoukinparis May 22 2009, 22:48:31 UTC
Dear...;_____; i don't even know what to say after all of that...now i'm the speechless one!

it really means so much to me when readers leave thoughtful comments such as yours, giving their own opinions on the characters and story - it's fun for me as the writer! ^^ and everything you said about yunho and jae was incredibly spot-on, which just made me even happier~

thank you so, so much for reading :3 i'm really glad you enjoyed it and hope to see you again soon!

<3

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wasurenaide_3 May 22 2009, 20:39:05 UTC
SEQUEL! I'm on concurrence. =D
I really like this Jae, too...he seems more like the "man" [so to speak] in the relationship than all other YunJae fics. But Yunho wasn't too girly either.
You did a great job. The dialogue was amazing, too. Definitely had me laughing.

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anoukinparis May 22 2009, 22:51:47 UTC
xDD sequel it is then!
ahhh~ it really annoys me how some writers make him out to be this delicate, overly-feminine thing (one of my pet peeves as a yunjae writer xP) so i'm glad that you found this jae more manly ^^ he's all man to me anyways lmao xD

thank you, thank you! I had fun writing the dialogue ;)

<3

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tvxqlover84 May 22 2009, 21:13:41 UTC
SPOT

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tvxqlover84 May 22 2009, 21:20:29 UTC
Please a sequel.. because now it makes me wonder what can exactly happen if he actually goes to Paris. Would Yunho be with his gf? Would he go and look for Jae?
But most of all makes me wonder if Jae is actually brave enough to let go of this 'thing' with Yunho.

In their exchange we can see how they both are still anonymous to each others but, share just what it comes to be significant for them.

I like this mysterious Jae, so much of everything in between. He doesnt do relationships but, if he lingers too much into Yunho he might want just that. To me he doesn't want to have a broken heart.

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anoukinparis May 22 2009, 22:54:39 UTC
i think i'll have to write a sequel now - i'm too curious to see what happens between them as well xD

i think the last few things you said were very insightful. that's pretty much how i pictured jae's motives, escaping all potential hurting~ kudos to you ^^

thanks for reading, love~ <3

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tvxqlover84 May 22 2009, 23:26:39 UTC
YAY!!! You are making me very very very happy.
I do have to agree the Jae here is more manly. He doesnt act girly at all he is just him, mysterious and a bit cold.
It actually makes me wonder if his past relationship had something to do with him being that way. There is a wall he puts to protect himself from everyone else.

Ohh what is going to happen?! CANT WAIT~!

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!

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cheezstikz May 22 2009, 21:18:56 UTC
ahh! this was awesomee!!!..u HAVE to write a sequel!!!

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anoukinparis May 22 2009, 22:55:54 UTC
:DD
YOU are awesome! and yesyes, i shall start on it!
thank you~~~

<3

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