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☃ ❄ END OF YEAR FEEDBACK MEME ❄ ☃
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[seisdemayo]

first of all, i want to thank you so much for doing this ♥

when i first started writing, i really have no background on how to write professionally (if that even exists). and i just know the problem with the change in tenses/tone in my writing. it is indeed my weakness. i've been wanting to learn how to keep writing in the present tense, tbh! lol but it keeps getting mixed up with the past tense so i'm really trying my best, until now, to improve my writing in this aspect. i will try harder so one day you (& everyone else? haha) can say i've changed into a better writer one day. haha

and about the "cliche" thing, i'm a reader as well and i very well know what you mean. this is another of what i want to improve on. i am the type who wants to put a twist in all of my stories, though i'm probably like everyone too. but then, once the story is going to the revelation, i know i've dropped a lot of hints on the way which will weaken the story's twist, hence making it quite predictable.

"There's a certain lack of suspense at key moments in your writing..." i guess i'll have to work on this :) i actually agree on most of what you said and i'm really thankful for this because i know i know most of this already, but it's of great help that you voiced it out ♥ so thank you so muuuuuuuuuuuucho