Fic: Two Summers, 1-11

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Comments

[danahid]

In this chapter, you achieve the balance between grieving a transformative, sustaining love with confusing, debilitating grief. "Grief is not all sadness" and everything is not always what it seems and lying to yourself can only work so long.

Brilliant work.

[darstellen]

I second danahid's comment and think it fascinating how you take the cliché -- Jim and Spock playing a game, Spock being a vicious winner -- and expand it into a dynamic cycle of devestating Trauerarbeit or grief, while at the same time acheiving such insights into both Jim and Spock's characters as we saw them in the film.