Fic: Observations, Ch 25

Jan 12, 2009 10:36

Thus far, no one has been successful in capturing the captain.

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butterflycages December 31 2009, 04:35:26 UTC
I, like several people before me, find it disconcerting how few comments this fic has. That being said, I only found this story today on my recent venture into Star Trek fandom, and thus far am enjoying it immensely.

In a way, I'm glad this wasn't the first fic I found in this fandom, only because previous stories have given me enough background on TOS to fully appreciate the undertones of chapters like this.

On a final note, your ability to convey so much insight and nuance, especially from an IC Spock's POV, in so few words completely astounds me. The amount of thought and effort into the details, especially the science and logic and blend of Spock humor, has me constantly flailing.

Simply put: great job. :)

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cynseris March 1 2010, 14:28:04 UTC
I've been slowly working my way through this fic since I found it yesterday - just thought I'd pause and comment to say that I am loving it so far.

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emluv March 6 2010, 22:42:39 UTC
I love the image of Jim hanging out in the children's ward with all the sick kids...

Also, per McCoy's standing order, I suspect no one is trying particularly hard to drag the captain back for rest and sustenance.

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ariadnechan May 10 2010, 05:41:17 UTC
I really like this little arc!
this now will make more sense in Spock mind when he find out of Tarsus!

i love that you make this new light in him, and i hope someone catches Jim and make him sleep 12 hours and eat!

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anonandanon July 15 2010, 23:19:42 UTC
I just have to say - this broke my heart, a little =)

(In a good way, no fear.)

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